|Cena_mark - 2022-07-28 |
This is awesome!
|Sludge Vohaul - 2022-07-28 |
Alright, the drum kit won me over.
You asked for it:
0:10 blank wall with dead air, discuss with art director
0:11 Is this Game of Thrones? Remove drinking cups from scene
0:18 MS drum kit is hilarious
0:22 incorrect fingering on guitar playing
0:22 Is the hat a Buckethead reference? Send the producer to KFC for a proper bucket.
0:28 Nobody uses RCA mics, spend money on a proper XLR, the D/A converters are worth it
0:28 Nice glasses!
0:35 Send the costume dept to buy a hat, the tape is obvious and shows on camera.
0:42 Same character on screen at the same time. This is an ongoing issue throughout the sequence
0:54 Random elements hanging on dresser
0:54 Globe not rotated to America
1:09 remove jumble of RCA cable from mic
1:13 -1:30 possible Harding test fail, be careful with strobing in a feature production
1:36 match cut failure, same BG with two chars
1:46 - 2:03 possible Harding test failure
1:50 bassline played on an acoustic guitar (sequence wide issue)
2:05 incorrect fingering on guitar
2:13 corpsing camera, please don't look directly into it unless directed
2:19 Buy a proper mic stand unless this is a purposeful Aerosmith reference
2:28 Broken 180 rule: BG has flipped
2:29 Elektra and EMI are not approved sponsors, neither is using Airplane as your logo
2:34 Make your bed
2:47-3:05 another Harding call, it is wise to minimize strobing for a general audience
3:09 duplicate chars onscreen, this is sequence wide, noting it for the last time
3:11 unreadable BG, please slow down for audience to get a sense where we are
3:18 unnecessary viewing of singer not singing
3:23 guitar not in sync with song
3:35 cymbals not moving when struck
3:54 Brian May has named a stellar nursery the 'Star Clusterfuck' based on this scene
3:55 get a haircut
3:59 duplicate characters, again. Last time I'm calling this. Both chars are corpsing camera
4:06 Hat askew
4:16 MPAA call, inappropriate hand gesture
4:34 mic stand crossing BG char's face
4:38-4:55 check lighting, difficult to decipher what's happening
4:57 hip shaking too suggestive, will limit your chances to be played on Lawrence Welk
5:03 moves away from mic, may need ADR
5:07 improper masking
5:10-5:11 same character in a different outfit? Feels like a hookup issue
5:16-5:23 too long a blackout unless this is intended for commercial space
5:18 credits should be centered, not lower third, and don't insult Interscope like this.
How come an MS paint drum kit is cool, but the mic cables aren't. Tons if videos have people playing unplugged electric guitars.
|Sludge Vohaul - 2022-07-30 |
Since FPM always asks what I think I called revisions, in detail. May he take them in stride for future songs.
Overall I liked this but any artist looking to grow should be able to handle criticism and improve from it.
Mic cables are fine. A giant unorganized bundle of cable hanging off the end of one in a music video is not.
I'll agree with mic. My first mic was a cheapo with a 1/4 cable permanently attached. I used an 1/8th adapter to plug it in to my beige PC. About a year into recording I got my first real microphone, a Shure SM58. When producing your own music gear is part of the growing process.
Shure mics rule. Relatively inexpensive, durable and reliable. Perfect for home recording
|dowstroyer666 - 2022-07-31 |
Video seems to not be working for me. Can someone describe what I should be watching since all I see is a blank screen.
Resubmitting new vid based on description of members of poe
DO NOT RESUBMIT! This is a music video. It belongs
Oh im sorry I only voted once on the resubmit
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