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Comment count is 14
Cena_mark - 2022-07-28

This is awesome!

Sludge Vohaul - 2022-07-28

Alright, the drum kit won me over.

Fox-Pixar Media - 2022-07-29

How did it won you over

Sludge Vohaul - 2022-07-30

You asked for it:

0:10 blank wall with dead air, discuss with art director
0:11 Is this Game of Thrones? Remove drinking cups from scene
0:18 MS drum kit is hilarious
0:22 incorrect fingering on guitar playing
0:22 Is the hat a Buckethead reference? Send the producer to KFC for a proper bucket.
0:28 Nobody uses RCA mics, spend money on a proper XLR, the D/A converters are worth it
0:28 Nice glasses!
0:35 Send the costume dept to buy a hat, the tape is obvious and shows on camera.
0:42 Same character on screen at the same time. This is an ongoing issue throughout the sequence
0:54 Random elements hanging on dresser
0:54 Globe not rotated to America
1:09 remove jumble of RCA cable from mic
1:13 -1:30 possible Harding test fail, be careful with strobing in a feature production
1:36 match cut failure, same BG with two chars
1:46 - 2:03 possible Harding test failure
1:50 bassline played on an acoustic guitar (sequence wide issue)
2:05 incorrect fingering on guitar
2:13 corpsing camera, please don't look directly into it unless directed
2:19 Buy a proper mic stand unless this is a purposeful Aerosmith reference
2:28 Broken 180 rule: BG has flipped
2:29 Elektra and EMI are not approved sponsors, neither is using Airplane as your logo
2:34 Make your bed
2:47-3:05 another Harding call, it is wise to minimize strobing for a general audience
3:09 duplicate chars onscreen, this is sequence wide, noting it for the last time
3:11 unreadable BG, please slow down for audience to get a sense where we are
3:18 unnecessary viewing of singer not singing
3:23 guitar not in sync with song
3:35 cymbals not moving when struck
3:54 Brian May has named a stellar nursery the 'Star Clusterfuck' based on this scene
3:55 get a haircut
3:59 duplicate characters, again. Last time I'm calling this. Both chars are corpsing camera
4:06 Hat askew
4:16 MPAA call, inappropriate hand gesture
4:34 mic stand crossing BG char's face
4:38-4:55 check lighting, difficult to decipher what's happening
4:57 hip shaking too suggestive, will limit your chances to be played on Lawrence Welk
5:03 moves away from mic, may need ADR
5:07 improper masking
5:10-5:11 same character in a different outfit? Feels like a hookup issue
5:16-5:23 too long a blackout unless this is intended for commercial space
5:18 credits should be centered, not lower third, and don't insult Interscope like this.

Cena_mark - 2022-07-30

How come an MS paint drum kit is cool, but the mic cables aren't. Tons if videos have people playing unplugged electric guitars.

Fox-Pixar Media - 2022-07-31


Have you checked Another One Bites The Dust

You could time code the whole thing like that

Sludge Vohaul - 2022-07-30

Since FPM always asks what I think I called revisions, in detail. May he take them in stride for future songs.

Overall I liked this but any artist looking to grow should be able to handle criticism and improve from it.

Mic cables are fine. A giant unorganized bundle of cable hanging off the end of one in a music video is not.

Cena_mark - 2022-07-31

I'll agree with mic. My first mic was a cheapo with a 1/4 cable permanently attached. I used an 1/8th adapter to plug it in to my beige PC. About a year into recording I got my first real microphone, a Shure SM58. When producing your own music gear is part of the growing process.

Sludge Vohaul - 2022-07-31

Shure mics rule. Relatively inexpensive, durable and reliable. Perfect for home recording

dowstroyer666 - 2022-07-31

Video seems to not be working for me. Can someone describe what I should be watching since all I see is a blank screen.

dowstroyer666 - 2022-07-31

Resubmitting new vid based on description of members of poe

Cena_mark - 2022-07-31

DO NOT RESUBMIT! This is a music video. It belongs

dowstroyer666 - 2022-07-31

Oh im sorry I only voted once on the resubmit

Fox-Pixar Media - 2022-07-31


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