want some notes? you had great comedic instincts with this one but your actual execution was just awful. just saying he looked like he had hit hard times, objecting to his "new material", anything would have been better than where you took it, which was to a lazy shitty place you should feel deeply bad about. you would certainly choke and bomb hard in any actual standup comedy situation, so please never ever try it, maybe you should even stop posting here because you're wasting everyones time with pathetic shit like that, you know what maybe just kill yourself