It's stumbling out of the gate, but given Jeff's previous output, I'll keep checking in to see whether it can be made to hit stride. He's set a fast pace with Golden Shower Girls and Jiz...
I thought it started slow, but improved gradually. I wasn't going to submit it until I got about halfway through. "Everyone on grindr knows that top means vers, vers means bottom, and bottom means impotent" was the line that clinched it.
The Amanda Lear-style mewling gives me hope that this will reach peak D'Enema soon. Thundercats never embraced its inner glam, even though it was always visible.